Every writer's first novel deserves a second look — even the bad ones. Dreamview is mine, and I'm breaking down exactly why it doesn't work. This is a space for honest critique, shared learning, and open discussion about the craft of writing. Your insights and comments welcome as we dissect what makes a novel fail.
by Peter J Coles @peafield.bsky.social
This has to start somewhere and it probably shouldn't be here.
October 03, 2025
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